Here is my story plan.
I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
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Friday, May 1, 2020
Narrative writing
This week we are doing narrative writing but first, we have to plan it out. First we have to pick a topic, the three topics we could choose from are Horror, Fantasy or Action/adventure. I chose to do Fantasy.
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Good planning Qyn...the sequence of events remind me of favourite Opera of mine called 'Madame Butterfly' (later on a musical called Vietnam was based on Madame Butterfly's story). I think it's well work developing your story.. maybe it'll become a musical one day too!:-) The name of the village should begin with with capital (uppercase) letters because it's a good name and a proper noun. Check out the use of to and too.
ReplyDeleteOpps.. I mean 'well worth' (not 'well work')
ReplyDeleteHi Qyn. I am looking forward to see how this is resolved. It sounds like there are plenty of opportunities for conflict and drama. I like that it is clearly in chronological order. Hollows Ville is a great name for the setting.
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