Here is my story plan.
I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday, May 1, 2020
Narrative writing
This week we are doing narrative writing but first, we have to plan it out. First we have to pick a topic, the three topics we could choose from are Horror, Fantasy or Action/adventure. I chose to do Fantasy.
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Good planning Qyn...the sequence of events remind me of favourite Opera of mine called 'Madame Butterfly' (later on a musical called Vietnam was based on Madame Butterfly's story). I think it's well work developing your story.. maybe it'll become a musical one day too!:-) The name of the village should begin with with capital (uppercase) letters because it's a good name and a proper noun. Check out the use of to and too.
ReplyDeleteOpps.. I mean 'well worth' (not 'well work')
ReplyDeleteHi Qyn. I am looking forward to see how this is resolved. It sounds like there are plenty of opportunities for conflict and drama. I like that it is clearly in chronological order. Hollows Ville is a great name for the setting.
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