I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
The most ouststanding aspect of your work was to tell the audience was telling them there was nothing inside then just taking the tissue out without telling them nothing is in there. Next time you could please speak a louder voice. this makes me feel like i'm in a cool magic show.
This is an outstanding magic trick you did. maybe you could come a little close to the camera. And it makes me wonder the time when i helped you made this.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows: 1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared. 2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say 3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
The most ouststanding aspect of your work was to tell the audience was telling them there was nothing inside then just taking the tissue out without telling them nothing is in there. Next time you could please speak a louder voice. this makes me feel like i'm in a cool magic show.
ReplyDeleteThis is an outstanding magic trick you did. maybe you could come a little close to the camera. And it makes me wonder the time when i helped you made this.
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